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share writing skills: how to make your article more highlights? NMET written marking \use of the connection between the components of the statement, the full text compact. \.
To get high marks should be in the \
a vocabulary choice - maverick
in writing \words or antonyms to replace common words.
1) the house of an upper floor in the Grass Street.
A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.
B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.
analysis: is in a common word, and situates in is the \not belong to high vocabulary.
2) We do a lot of work over the weekend.
A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.
B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.
analysis: B did not use sentences to express a lot of too much direct , but the use of the endless. endless is the \
3) bathroom and kitchen are very good.
A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.
B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.
main points in the expression, B sentences using the well furnished tudor watches, stronger tone than good, but also look lively.
in the sentence, the \
Second, the structure of sentences - sentences when different
in both sentences to make a lively, but also make it brief.
1, using different expressions of people, especially the promotion of Chinese sentence structure to break the shackles of the restructuring of the sentence is more popular.
1) Tangshan eighties in the twentieth century there was a major earthquake.
A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.
B: A terrible earthquake hit / struck Tangshan in the 1980s.
most of the students to use the there be structure, which is right, but B has abandoned the common sentence sentence. Another way to use the \
2) your letter of August 15 I received this morning.
A: I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning. (the way most people use)
B: Your letter of August 15th reached / got to me this morning. (and the way most people use different, simple)
2. use some strong sentences, such as emphasizing sentence, exclamatory sentences, inverted sentences, etc., enhance the expression statement. Such as:
3) Fu saved my sister.
A: Ah Fu saved my sister. (usually sentences)
B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister. (emphasis sentence)
4) we see that growing crops and vegetables was very gratifying happy.
A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well. (general declarative sentence)
B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well. (exclamation)
3, sentence variety, complex decent. Should be avoided in writing the same sentence the same length, but should pay attention to changes in sentences, such as Long Short Sentence combining simple sentences, compound sentences and complex sentences sharing, can also use the simplified sentences, etc.; some of the more complex structures such as the independent nominative , word structure may be used. A sentence in the following expression of more than simple sentences, and many there be use of the structure, monotonous, tedious, and sentence B have their own characteristics (ask someone to my own analysis.)
5) This is a 25 square meters of housing, housing inside the bedroom, a bathroom, a kitchen; bedroom with a bed, sofa, table and chairs.
A: It's a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.
B: It's a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.
III stylistic rules and layout - the distinctive
in writing, we may be time, space or other logical order to arrange the various elements, as well as the prominent theme, structured, we should pay attention to learning and the use of sentences and paragraphs explain the topic sentence and so on. Moupian on the layout, NMET2002 Pham Van exemplary. See:
Opinions are divided on the question.
60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls Lace Wigs, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.
On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.
1) The article used to be accountable Opinions are divided ... sentence, straight to the point, are used in the next two paragraphs the topic sentence (see the bold part), the full text of compact structure, expression serious.
2) points in the presentation when the points in order of appearance Pham Van also made an adjustment, such as \one on the end of the sentence: They suggested, however, fees should be charged low. This will distinguish between the priorities, themes prominent coherent.
3) Pham Van used and, what is more, however other conjunctions, between paragraphs use on the other hand (that view is contrary both before and after) wow power leveling, the use of these means of strengthening the connection between sentences, links between paragraphs, and make us the expression of a coherent and seamless.
4) Pham Van Note in the second paragraph does not receive tickets for the \.
short, to make their article there are bright spots, to attract readers, get a high score in the exam, it should be in words, sentences, Moupian work hard, even if there is a specialty are \should be affirmed.
高考语文试题指瑕(江西卷)--盘点2008
Poetic language
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